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Blissful Incoherence~ By Saloni Kaul

5/4/2016

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A song that hums and trills so in your ear
Until your mind’s all laden and abuzz with the tune,
Melodic fragments disjointed, that obstinately do adhere
Akin to mule not budging on some blazing dune,
There’s beauty embedded in that impulse-puller,
In making take it concrete shape or faint
Quite as intense crazy sporadic bursts of colour
That thrill excite the artist just about to paint.
Why is it that those who love in spurts half ploughed
With half said outbursts, cries, sweet sayings as the norm
Are equally aroused as with the loud
Long declarations of love uttered in fine finished form.
In flashed arcs glimpse perfect circumference,
Inexplicable the beauties o’ incoherence.


Author Bio:
Saloni Kaul was first published at the age of ten. As critic and columnist, she has enjoyed thirty seven years of being published in leading dailies and magazines.  Saloni Kaul's most recent published works include: "The Sage" in the Tipton Poetry Journal. She is also the featured poet on Eye on Life Magazine: http://eyeonlifemag.com/the-poetry-locksmith/saloni-kaul
2 Comments
jeanne sutton
5/5/2016 09:22:46 am


From title on, yours is a fine Shakespearean sonnet. As a sometime writer in same form, thank you for the extra level of reader pleasure.

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Saloni Kaul
5/6/2016 07:57:13 am

Thanks so much for your comment on my poem and sonnet. Indeed, the Shakespeare Sonnet form in spite of its compactness allows for so much flexibility and has a room so ample that were it not for the constraints of contemporary times and poetry and the requirements of editors and publishers I would write these sonnets all the time.
You might read the Saloni Kaul sonnets published in Tipton Poetry Journal Edition # 29 and in Mad Swirl's Poetry Forum published February 2016 and tell me what you think. Saloni Kaul

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